Farmer’s
Daughter
The
sun is out and the sky is the color of sapphire,
signifying
that the time was now and today was the day
to
go out and harvest the vast, brown expanse
of
lush fields that were always my haven,
for
they raised me with their calming whispers
And
taught me much of the world in the form of experience.
Once
we met, you became my life changing experience
You
drew me in fast with your eyes of sapphire,
My
first words to you were mumbles, practically whispers.
I
learnt what the meaning of beauty was on that day.
Your
personality and grace were that of heaven,
the
only explication was that you had traversed the expanse.
We
spent our time climbing on bales, avoiding the expanses,
throwing
bush parties, adding to our experiences,
sleeping
under the stars, dreaming of the heavens,
skinny
dipping in the dugout, creating drops of sapphire,
jumping
over swaths of canola on a competitive day,
avoiding
her farmer father, whose shotgun did not whisper.
We
expressed our thoughts to each other in the form of whispers,
we
regarded the country sunsets and watched our horizons expand,
we
said ‘I love you’ on top of grainery roofs at least once a day;
we
were always searching for new experiences.
We
valued our time together on the farm more than sapphires;
the
tractor was my home but with her, it was my haven.
I
would count the days until I saw her again, my angel from heaven.
The
end of the harvest season had been a nagging whisper;
the
sparkling snow was my only reminder of her sapphires.
We
had wished for the length of harvest to expand
but
the weather never allowed it; it put an end to our experience.
I
returned back home, and hoped to be reunited one day.
The
sun had set on the field, today was the day.
After
today, I would hopefully get to be her haven
for
we would be happy together, I know from experience.
My
thoughts and feelings would now become whispers.
For
the chance to be with her, I spared no expense;
I
encompassed my feelings for her in a ring of sapphire.
On
the day we met, my prayers, which were only ever whispered,
were
answered by heaven over the great expanse
and
allowed me to experience the beauty of sapphire.
By
Ashley Smith
3 comments:
I really enjoyed the line "We spent our time climbing on bales, avoiding the expanses" because I feel that it encompasses the carefree and playful nature with which young love tends to view obstacles. Did you mean to say farmer father in the final line of the third stanza.
It's tough to use a word like sapphire over and over and make it work, but I think that it does work. Sometimes I think that the meaning of the word sapphire in certain stanzas is lost. It's tough to know if it means eyes or literal jewels or just a metaphor.
It really is wonderful in how it brings the reader into that life. I like it a lot.
I think that this is my favourite of all of your poems thus far! I like that the only gender given is to the daughter, so that it could be open to multiple types of relationships. I'm a farm gal, so I like it more because of that. All in all, I just love it. Good job!
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