Thursday, March 6, 2014

Andrew's Sonnet 1

I was born a mason, carving stone and erecting walls
around my scared being until my limbs grew weary.
You breached the walls, brought them down upon us
leaving one soul to rise from the rubble, naked and proud.
Life was ushered forth from the heap, growing
as wild and tangled as our bodies in the sun.
We championed nature, blamed it for our struggles
healed wounds with its perfection, masking weakness.
When we’re dancing, toe to toe, making modest steps,
is that distance fleeting, or is it there to keep?
When we’re standing, hand in hand, bowing center stage,
be it heart in throat, or be it tongue in cheek?
When we’re lying, side by side, tasting desired flesh,
is it fear defeated, or is it fear complete?


Andrew Evans




2 comments:

Unknown said...

Love the line "be it heart in throat, or be it tongue in cheek?". Now whose poems are all about sex? Great imagery though I had some trouble finding a rhythm. On a totally unrelated topic I'm sure there must be a Myley Cyrus joke in this poem somewhere.

Unknown said...

Sex = <3

But actually, I really liked what you did with stone and love imagery. I wonder if all of the commas are necessary though.